Winter Awake
A poem inspired by winter walks.
Hush, hush, the snow on the brush, Alone in the silver hill; Shuffle, crunch, the powdery bunch Now lost in the winter’s will. The empty trees were stuck in the freeze As posts of some old home; Its roof was white as the cloudy light That shone on the snowy foam. Hush, below, the mumbling flow, The shallow, crackling creek; Through roots and shale it was dug in the dale And all of its surface was solid and frail And speckled with prints of a paw or a tail Of creatures, hidden and meek. And feeling the flush, the blood in my blush, The shivering warmth in my chest, I walk with all, the thrush and his call, The world, awake and at rest.
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Abram,
this is exquisite! I know no better term. I will return to it again and again, it is this good. Thank you for the experience of reading it.
Highlights for me: the quadruple rhyme in the penultimate stanza and the final line.